nice, didja make ur own lineart?

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Ooh, very nice! I love your shading and I like how your lines are sketchy yet still refined.

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Lol, it's the lineart from the original Jeiyla drawing. I just colored it. But yeah. :]

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Thanks! Drawing with the 0.5mm lead over a fainter col-erase sketch has worked well for me through the years. It allows me to get clean lines without the mess of sketching with another graphite pencil. That's the cool thing about the col-erase pencils: they don't smear. Saves a lot of trouble. ;]

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see now thats what i need to do, that can save a whole lotta time am i right?

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Niice! She looks like a real dynamic figure. I like the shading and the curves of the limbs. The face is almost too cute : )

The lightning could have been a bit better on the other hand...

thanks for your thoughts!

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Very nice job on the pose, cool character design. Considering the short amount of time you spent on the coloring, it looks quite nice (especially the blue you added to the shadows). I like the sketchier feel to it.

I think if you wanted to you could have pushed the range of contrast between the highlights and shadows. A couple of things on the anatomy--since she's not human, possibly you can disregard these suggestions if this is actually how her anatomy should be. First, her head is pretty big compared to her body. Also I think her lower torso is too short; the distance from nipples to belly button is usually the same as belly button to crotch, and here the lower torso is shorter in comparison.

Ooh, and I'm guessing the shiny armor is metal? It would be neat to see scratches or a texture on it of some sort X)

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Thanks again for the crit! Yeah, this one was more of a sketchy kinda deal, so I didn't go all out on detail, but those are good suggestions! I do need to look at the torso area on my drawings from now on....I have a bad habit of misplacing the belly button. :] As far as texture goes, I'll remember that for the future! Thanks a lot. I'm pretty new to coloring, so it means a lot.

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